Butcher Pete Ep. 1 I'm not really feeling it.
The humor is too forced, and stunted, too herky jerky and difficult to make out what the main character is saying.
It's not good, but it's not bad either. But improve and this could be a great episode series!
I'm not really feeling it.
The humor is too forced, and stunted, too herky jerky and difficult to make out what the main character is saying.
It's not good, but it's not bad either. But improve and this could be a great episode series!
Thank you! I needed the feedback. I aim to improve going forward.
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